Quite boring video
The story is quite thin, it does not last long at all and has no details, it is very linear and barly nothing unexpected happens. The air bombing was unexpected yes, but the impact of the event was noexistant to the plot.
And the file is stupid big. It is about 17½ MB too big. Drop the video and not only will the file size be sane, you will fix the horrible blur problem that you have.
Harsh critic I see. Ignoring your first statements the file size is large because the movie was created in After Effects, not Flash. The original movie is 378MB so I compressed it as much as I could without completely destroying the quality. That might explain the "horrible blur problem" that bugs you so much. If you would like to see it in higher quality I left links on the loading page to two other sources.
It is a simple plot with a simple end.
Video done right
I may hate needless video, but I love it when people combine video with proper drawings like this.
You have some neat art and the music is actually quite good. The issue is that there is so much non action time. 60 % of the time lacks everything, music, energy and animation.
Fix the pacing and just slightly improve on the art side and this is frontpage material.
Bad mixing and horrible script
You got the art down and the animation is getting there, but you need to work on the mixing and writing.
One of your best works
Now this is what I like about your works, good action, great music and marvelous art. Pity that you still insist on denying scaling (not that I can't bypass that limit with one line of code), because this runs good in fullscreen.
I guess the lyrics where a little hard to make out and that it was slightly confusing with text on screen that didn't match the lyrics, but that's nothing big.
But it's about 10 times as large as it should be. Stop abusing video.
And the humor wasn't too thrilling.
Horibly offcenter sound
The animation was ok I guess. Not much of a plot here. But what really hurts is the offcenter sound. It is a major pain to try and listen to sound that is so badly mixed.
what's offcenter sound the song or the sound effects or in general?
It is nice art work, but this is hardly animated. It is mostly still pictures. There is also the issue of long sections where nothing is happening.
Also, I do believe the sound needs to be redone, I can clearly hear several skype sounds.
This makes little to no sense and has plenty of unexplainable events. I love it.
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