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Fair concept

You need to tweak a lot of things, most importantly the directing, the voices didn't fit the animation very well at all.
I don't like the overstyled subtitles, they where too focus stealing. They shouldn't be placed where they where.
But could this work? Sure.

Excelent beneath the surface

While the trailer was far from impressive, the actual deal was excellent. While the technicalities could clearly have been improved, that matters little. The real content is not that, the real content is the art that you drew, and most importantly the story that you wrote. It has hearth, it has natural, yet strong emotions. I could barely hold my tears, the story is just that good.

SpikeVallentine responds:

Thank you for your tears.

Wowsers on barely holding tears. I'm glad you held them in. Save your tears for "Click"

Good concept, short execution

You really should have made this longer, this has a lot of potentional, but it's wasted by being so short.

Waste of time

This is only 5 sec of badly ripped animation from the game. And there is no sound. There is absolutely no point in submitting this. It is not just "too short", it doesn't have any content what so ever. This is an insult to the original game.

An excelent presentation

It has a very clear, yet cool style about the graphics and manages to make the facts interesting. Howerver, the music loops very badly. But the music is very good.

Everything good about stick fights

Good music, great action, and a plot that can be excused. It had variety and did not feel one sided.

Not very interesting

The movie was so dark that it was hard to see what was going on. The video also clearly needed to be deinterlaced. As for the plot, what plot? The music was nice, but that's about it.

Good action with horrible ending

The action was quite good. It lacks sounds effects there. But the ending is just horrible, it takes a 180 and goes of into really immature humor. This is very jarring compared to the rest of the movie. And the ending itself is just horrible, bad art, bad humor and yeah, it's bad. The ending drags down the whole movie.

Hulalaoo responds:

sorry, i go to kill me now

Interesting

You definitely need vector shapes here, the bitmaps just doesn't work. Go and trace the pictures. It would be nice if the mouths of the characters where moving for real instead of just in the suptitle bar.
You should also put some more effort into finding new sound effects, it's not that they are bad, it's that they are overused by everyone using the same effect.
Overall, an interesting beginning, but it has room for improvement without having any direct faults.

Mixing issues

The sound levels where uneven, some voices where hard to hear. Other than that, marvelous work, I am hoping to see more of this.

CartoonCoffee responds:

I tried fixing the sounds. And you definitely will see more

Don't expect me to cut you any slack, I say what I feel. If I think that something was done wrong, I will tell you, with or without manners. Just don't dare using video for the wrong reasons or write a bad actionscript "tutorial", I am not kind on those.

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