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[The Super Duper Tutorial]

Meh, another code dump

Please explain your algorithms. And seriously, did you even test the car script? It is ridiculously easy to run the car into the wall.
I did see the two or so explain buttons, but seriously, the contents in them is laughable. I mean, do you expect me to not know what gotoAndStop does?
You should not explain the obvious, you should explain the algorithm so that people know wtf the script is doing.
And some of the code dumps where is such a small font I couldn't be bothered reading how bad those scripts where.

Girdf responds:

you're pretty stupid if you don't know what gotoAndStop does...

there was nothing wrong with the car code
it was just the way i made that car

i guess this tutorial is for people who have a brain and actually know a little about flash
you should of looked at some tutorial for new people then...

[Schwarzkäppchen]

Stick to movie making

I mean, the intro movie is really good, but the game is just garbage. Please just stick to movie making, you are good at that.

[Preloading: For Dummies]

Better then most tutorials

I do kinda like it, very skillfully done.
There is just one thing, the gotoAndPlay(1) part, that is old. Just stop the moiveclip (_root is one btw)
and add an event handler for the clip event "EnterFrame"
_root.onEnterFrame=function () {}
Also, it does say a few things about the submission if it doesn't use it's own preloader.

Homeless responds:

_root doesn't stop the movieclip. That stops the whole movie. _root.stop() is what the ng and my preloader use to stop the movie at the first frame.

I have to use the gotoAndPlay(1) to loop the movieclip so it will keep refreshing the actionscript until the whole movie is loaded, so it won't check the bytes loaded once and stop there. It keeps looping in frames 1 and 2 of the symbol until percent == 100, than it goes to frame loaded (playbutton)

[Huge Game Tutorial]

Smelly dump of as

DO NOT USE, THIS IS A STUPID CRAPY CODE DUMP!
And not even a good code dump, this one sucks.
Code listings that are rediculusly small, scripts he most likely does not even know how they work.
If this should get any revard, it is the turd.

A-Tech responds:

me making tutorials to help people not to hear you say you are better then me.

[Advanced Tutorial]

I seriosly hope this is a joke

Drop the stupid computer voice, most people can read.
And is you doing a code dump on us? and please, "telltarget" stinks and is depreciated.

wolfinator-x responds:

I made the voice because I thaought it would sound cool. BTW, it's the best I could do for now. Anyway, I don't care about how the acstionscript looks.