henke37's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NBHS Episode 1]

Needs work

You need to speak up, nobody can hear what you are saying. And please cut the pauses, the moive needs to not sudenly get boring for a sec.
And please make a plot or something, focus more on the script.

shadowford responds:

it works on my speaker, all the schools speakers and all my friends' speakers. And what this about pauses? Why did you give me 4 for graphics? You suck at flash anyway so you wouldn't know. This needs no work. But your head might

[Metroid: Rogue Formula]

Ok, but it can be better

Drop the sprites, you can proaply use regular grapichs better and make it longer, make the read pauses longer too. I prefer manual advancing when reading.

cap123 responds:

thanks, alot of this stuff has already been said but i appreciate the help.

thanks for the review ;)