henke37's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Second Chance]

Quite boring video

The story is quite thin, it does not last long at all and has no details, it is very linear and barly nothing unexpected happens. The air bombing was unexpected yes, but the impact of the event was noexistant to the plot.

And the file is stupid big. It is about 17½ MB too big. Drop the video and not only will the file size be sane, you will fix the horrible blur problem that you have.

hrechkaness responds:

Harsh critic I see. Ignoring your first statements the file size is large because the movie was created in After Effects, not Flash. The original movie is 378MB so I compressed it as much as I could without completely destroying the quality. That might explain the "horrible blur problem" that bugs you so much. If you would like to see it in higher quality I left links on the loading page to two other sources.

[You Roast My Beef]

Video done right

I may hate needless video, but I love it when people combine video with proper drawings like this.

molkman responds:

Thanks

[Bruce the Broccoli]

Horibly offcenter sound

The animation was ok I guess. Not much of a plot here. But what really hurts is the offcenter sound. It is a major pain to try and listen to sound that is so badly mixed.

ThatAwesomeDude responds:

what's offcenter sound the song or the sound effects or in general?

[The Legacy of Shaolin OP]

Could be better animated

This is a nice movie, but the animation has room for improvement. I feel that you used a too low framerate and that it wasn't as smoothly animated as possible.

Lanmana responds:

Yeah, I agree. I kind of ran out of time to finish it, especially in the middle part with the crane and the wolf head. Maybe if I can find the time later I'll come back to it and fix it up. Thanks for the review!

[Alien Fist]

You forgot the movie

You forgot to embed the video, meaning that the movie is not going to work. There is a runtime error telling that you even hardcoded the video path.

laneyboy007 responds:

Fixed the problem

[That Was My Cookie]

Boring

The animation was bad, the story was thin and the lack of sound hurt it a lot. Oh, and the pointless mouse cursor that covers the movie during playback sucked.

Shirokaze2012 responds:

oh thanks for judging me as if i were a pro =__= because im not >:\ i appresiate the review, and im sorry it couldn't be more entertaining. i had only two weeks to get this done and because it was going to be displayed in front of a teacher who knocks off ten points off your semester grade for each bad word you say really put a limit on the room for creativity
i know the flash not having sound hurt, and im TRYING to find something that would fit, but i figured unfitting music would be even worse
and the mouse i agree was a bit pointless :\ but i like it, you could move it to the corner of the screen you know -___-''

but i do thank you for the review ^w^

[Super Paper Robot]

Underwhelmed

It's not bad, but it's not exciting either. It does not tell a story, it does not have any action. The art was not bad, but it was boring. It was indeed stylish, but not to the level that is needed. The animation was ok, not noticeable. The music was ok and fit ok.

As for the execution, the play button did not work properly, it only started the sound for some strange reason, leaving a black screen. The sound was clearly not set to sync since this happened. You should have taken the 3 sec to set it to streamed instead.

M4KBOT responds:

Believe me, it took along time to figure out how to do the sound in this one. The reason why the first piece of music is not streamed is so that it can carry over multiple scenes.