Nice begining
Just needs a lot of polishing here, the animation and sound sure can be improved.
But there is some clear talent here, just keep working on it and the quality will come.
Nice begining
Just needs a lot of polishing here, the animation and sound sure can be improved.
But there is some clear talent here, just keep working on it and the quality will come.
Definitely definitely, both are being tuned much tighter for Episode two, as our experience grows, it's kind of like a saiyan so does our work! If you see what I'm saying anyway.. You know how after every fight Goku gets more powerful, well we'd be Goku and our skills at animation would be the power and uh... oh nevermind. Thanks for watching, see you for episode 2?
-Taco Buttfish.
Yet another video disguised as flash
Please, never submit video to a flash portal, it just ruins the quality and wastes bandwidth. The actual cartoon wasn't that bad, not the best that I have seen, but not bad at all.
I checked out your submissions and all I can say is...
Please never submit bad games to the flash portal. It ruins an otherwise good time people can have on this website and waste time. :)
JK Cheers mate.
Promissing begining
You have yet to master the art of Flash animation, but you are still very talented, keep working!
Umm... thx?
Way blocky video
I have seen many submissions that wasn't actually flash animations, but this is the worst one, the video quality is crap. But, I don't judge just by that, no, the music was bad. And the voice was bad too. The animation wasn't too bad, but it just can't counter balance all these issues.
The animation actually WAS completed in Flash. Camera movement and fade-ins/outs as well as audio was handled in After Effects. So I can't deny the blocky quality of the video. Sorry about that.
The music and voice was INTENTIONALLY bad, as it's a parody of the singer Colm Wilkinson. Look up some videos of him, they're quite funny.
A much better quality version of this video IS available at my blog, a link to which is provided in the pre-loader.
Shakey video with shakey explanations
The video was very shakey and obviously unplanned, try actually planing the video if you are going to record something. Also, you never once explained what any of the steps did, this is less of a tutorial and more "duplicate my work in 5 easy steps".
I should probably mention that you didn't explain what the script does, how it does it, the exact symbol you placed on the timeline, why you chose that one or why you activated the movie directly. And the music was not very relevant and possibly distracting.
What you need to do is to explain each step, both what it does and why it is done. You also need to work on your media chosing skills, the filesize is huge due to it being all video.
The purpose of this video is to help "INSTALL" the NG api ad system... not explain every single aspect of it.
:P
Not that bad
You need to have more intense fights, there isn't enough action. Also, you seem to have some issues getting the dramatic frame to have the right position and shape, it leaks.
Yes, whatever, thanks
Nice
I think the preloader is busted, try testing the preloader the next time, k?
It works fine on my computer, newgrounds brings out the worst in it.
Nice looking
I think you forgot to finish the credits. I mean, you never credited the awesome music you used.
The only song i used that i didnt make or rip myself was credidted on the page right under my profile link. all other songs i made or got from my nes roms. thanks for the review
Don't expect me to cut you any slack, I say what I feel. If I think that something was done wrong, I will tell you, with or without manners. Just don't dare using video for the wrong reasons or write a bad actionscript "tutorial", I am not kind on those.
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