Good action with horrible ending
The action was quite good. It lacks sounds effects there. But the ending is just horrible, it takes a 180 and goes of into really immature humor. This is very jarring compared to the rest of the movie. And the ending itself is just horrible, bad art, bad humor and yeah, it's bad. The ending drags down the whole movie.
sorry, i go to kill me now
Mixing issues
The sound levels where uneven, some voices where hard to hear. Other than that, marvelous work, I am hoping to see more of this.
I tried fixing the sounds. And you definitely will see more
Very good work
Clearly a lot of work has been done here, and it shows, the animation is good and there is clear hints that there is a story starting. However, I do not like the post production, the episode start too abruptly, the actions just starts the instant you click play. The intro should run after the menu, not before it.
Yeah I see what you mean. I'll try to stop making the episodes start so quickly but as for the intro i've been having a problem with getting it to start after the menu. Thanks for the review!
Good work, but slight implementation issues
Your preloader is broken, you should have that fixed, stuff is loading too early.
Also, the GUI was unstable, it kinda floated between a few pixels. That's not nice.
However, even with these issues, this is high quality work.
Thank you very much, dunno what to do about the Preloader, and the GUI is suppose to float between a few pixels. Again thanks for the review!
Not a bad concept
Maybe you should try correcting the workflow? Import the video from AE, don't export from Flash to AE, the art loses the vector parts and becomes crappy video.
My workflow is fine. SWF's dont lose any quality going into AE. Any loss of quality is due to me exporting it out as an FLV. Watch this video on my youtube and you'll see the difference in quality.
Exporting video out of Flash means I can't add any AE effects (which I did add to this), and the final render will have awful compression.
Trust me, I've done my research.
Not worthy of copyright
Yes, you managed to show the waveform, but that is far from enough. You need something that doesn't scream "minimal effort and no creativity". It's technically working, but not even there impressive. You need to add creativity here, it is not enough to just show the basic waveform (or the fft either), you need to create a work of art here! You know blend modes, you got a drawing api, but what you lack is creativity. You are about as unique as drawing the letter A with three lines. Everyone is doing it, exactly that way. You need to be different to stand out.
I would like to thank you for your criticisms - it's what drives me to develop more intricate Flash projects. I've already began adapting it. It's now a part of my Flash music player. Thanks for the criticism :D
Not too bad
You got the animation down, but the music just wasn't great. I mean, it wasn't horrible, but it just wasn't great.
well thats the only bit I did so I will take that well... :)
Halfway there
You got the drawing and music down. However, the sound and animation was noticeably poor. You also need to get the directing fixed, the acting was downright bad. There was noticeable pauses and such.
As I said, I was running out of time so it ended up a bit rushed, but thanks, I tried to make up for it by putting more effort into the drawings themselves.
As for the acting.. well.. let's just say it was both of our first times ever trying to voice act and we were nervous. We'll get better over time.
Don't expect me to cut you any slack, I say what I feel. If I think that something was done wrong, I will tell you, with or without manners. Just don't dare using video for the wrong reasons or write a bad actionscript "tutorial", I am not kind on those.
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