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Uhm, needs work, loads of it

First of all, the story was poor.
Secound, the first part was just plain ugly. The later part was just poor and could have been done better.
And please, work on the script more. And don't mix art styles, that sucks.

Too big?

I am sure that it is possible to both optimize the file size and arrange for a manual upload. Just contect the staff and they will understand, I mean, they where the ones who did put it on the frontpage.

70 MiBi is worth it for 30 mins of animation, they don't dislike long movies, they dislike bloated movies.

Please get it on newgrounds.

Not worth it's size

Seriously, get a preloader and fix the file size, a one min file should not even go past 2 MiBi.

Try harder, a lot harder

And check your facts.
Seriously, why even bother with something as stupid as a multiline string literal for outputing html, when php has the html mode that was made for this very purpose.

Do I smell copy and paste of some of the text?

Did you just explain about fprintf without explaining neither sprintf nor fopen?
That's just sad to do.

The mysql code uses pconect without explaining it. It also never shows the REAL error message that mysql has at the connect error.
And please, I am fairly sure that insert does not use the keyword SET...
And php scripts does not need to close the db connection as you wrongly claim, php closes it for you at script end. The error you describe is about something different.
The order by clause does not use a table name...

And how does the explode and implode functions have anything to do with mysql?

Also, please remove the stupid intro animation, we don't want to watch it, we want to read.

Please, learn enough actionscript to make a proper jukebox, song specific start and stop buttons? Get real.

Keep working

You just need a little more experience to be great. Just keep working.

Bloated for something this simple

Drop the stupid music at the end and reduce the file size with 90 %.

Needs practise on the animation

You seem to be good enough at drawing, but please, practice more on the animation.
And the story seemed more than a bit random.
Also, is it too much to ask that you at last learn enough actionscript to prevent the movie from looping?
Also, try watching the movie before submitting it, things like those bad subtitles should have been caught by doing that.

Just right for haloween

A cool movie.

Needs more vector art

I can see that you are a great artist, but you need to work on reducing the fbf. No reuse kills the size of the movie. And i think that nice cleanly dran lines is better too, that is the biggest concern.

You just proved that small movies can be good

This is an excellent cartoon, even without considering the file size. Reminds me of the bytesizes.

Don't expect me to cut you any slack, I say what I feel. If I think that something was done wrong, I will tell you, with or without manners. Just don't dare using video for the wrong reasons or write a bad actionscript "tutorial", I am not kind on those.

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