henke37's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[mario fight]

Bad quality

Did you even install Flash? This is just a blurry video with animation that is far from frame by frame. The video quality is so bad that the text is unreadable. You also screwed up the transparency for one of the sperch bubbles. Redo this from the ground, and this time, actually use Flash.

[Mario vs Sonic (Sprite)]

Very good

It could use a story. The camera work could be tweaked a bit. You need to put in a preloader and proper boring title- and credit-screens.

[Pencilmation #14]

Good but short

It just doesn't reach the normal level of wacky hijinks with this short time, the story doesn't have enough space for plot.

[Wolf]

Quite laggy

The framerate really dropped, even when they was just talking. The sound also got out of sync. There needs to be something done about those issues, but the art and story itself was quite nice.

[Rolling Girl]

Excelent work

It is a great music video that fits the music very well.

[Tiny Japanese Girl]

Good

The movie was good, but there was one big issue, all the needless and distracting effects. The need to be toned down. One lens flare is ok. 20 is not. I would rather had this with just Flash, not just because video sucks, but because of all these ugly effects. The ones that actually fits should be easy to do with just Flash.

[Larkmart - Emergency]

What?

This made no to little sense. That's why it's awesome. The voice acting works fine and the humor is nice too.

[The Legacy of Shaolin OP]

Could be better animated

This is a nice movie, but the animation has room for improvement. I feel that you used a too low framerate and that it wasn't as smoothly animated as possible.

Lanmana responds:

Yeah, I agree. I kind of ran out of time to finish it, especially in the middle part with the crane and the wolf head. Maybe if I can find the time later I'll come back to it and fix it up. Thanks for the review!

[Ex Memories]

Needs revoicing

The voices where badly recorded, they need to be redone. The rest of the movie was nice.

[LOSTE]

Of center speech

The animation was ok, but what really bugged me was the audio. All the speech was of center, making it hard to watch the movie.