Good, but not perfect
You seriosly need to either drop the crapy voice clips or get more contextual ones. But otherwise, great work.
Pm me about a intelegent preloader/player version check I want to publish.
Good, but not perfect
You seriosly need to either drop the crapy voice clips or get more contextual ones. But otherwise, great work.
Pm me about a intelegent preloader/player version check I want to publish.
Great stuff
You need to slow the text down, while I can keep up with it, most people don't. A option for the delay would be very usefull.
Also let people disable those noices when people are talking. I liked them, but most people doesn't.
Very nice textingsystem, smart linewraping, smart name system and the stylish chunk by chunk writing.
Great job!
Just check the animation a little closer(there where gaps in the shoulders). Subtitles could be usefull. Try to remake the preloader, the bar has the same color as the bg. Looking forward for the next part.
Ok, but it can be better
Drop the sprites, you can proaply use regular grapichs better and make it longer, make the read pauses longer too. I prefer manual advancing when reading.
thanks, alot of this stuff has already been said but i appreciate the help.
thanks for the review ;)
One mistake
Don't scare people, that ruined your chances big. The movie was ok.
Good
Make the mowie biger and longer and you will get a 10.
One of a kind
Hope it dosn't stay that way, make more!
Best one you made
When will wm and bm fight?
Funny!
You should have labeld the endings as endings not as winner, some people just veiw the one the think deserve to win. Keep that in mind for the next one.
Nice work!
Now go get some deals with some schols and make some money.
Don't expect me to cut you any slack, I say what I feel. If I think that something was done wrong, I will tell you, with or without manners. Just don't dare using video for the wrong reasons or write a bad actionscript "tutorial", I am not kind on those.
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